Tuesday, February 11, 2020

Microfiction: Skin Crawlers




Image of a clown statue. Source: urban legends 
Clowns 

My friend was dog sitting for me while I was on vacation.
She sent me a text asking what she should do with the clown statue that was in living room...I didn't own a clown statue..



SHHHHH
Silence is more deadly than words.




Author's note:
The first story was inspired by a a horror story that I read in a magazine when I was a kid. I remember that my aunt and uncle got me some makeup and other spa-like presents, along with a magazine for my birthday. This story has stuck with me for so many years because of how creepy I thought that it was. You can read the actual story here.
In the second story, I first, I wasn't sure at all what I wanted to write or how to even write a story with 6 words. However, I sat and reflected about sayings that meant something to me and immediately thought of this one.

Reading Notes: Narayan's Ramayana B

Reading Notes: Narayan's Ramayana B


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Image: Golden Deer. Source: tsl.org

The Golden Deer 
Narayan's Ramayana
  • Maricha assumed the shape of a golden deer with silvern spots 
    • golden tints upon his haunches
    • sapphire on his antlers 
    • neck was golden 
    • silver-white his flank and side 
  • this starts out as a story and then goes into a rhyming
  •  Want to capture the deer and then slay the deer for Sita's sake
    • afterwards will skin him to use his hide as a "golden carpet" 

Narayan's Ramayama 
  • Rama chases the deer and shoots an arrow at it, which pierces through its heart 
    • causes Maricha to spring out of the deer's body and begins to cry out for Sita to save him, but he ends up dying
  • Sita cries out 
    • she cannot live without Rama 
    • says that she will not live one moment after he dies 
    • also says that if Rama is slain that she will die by drowning, or by poison, or else by the noose

Friday, February 7, 2020

Week 4 Lab Advice to Writers


Writing Advice & Tips 

Image: I am a writer. Source: Writing Cooperative 

With writing so many short stories every week, I thought that it was important that I explore and try to find information that could help me (and whomever reads this!) write for my personal blog. The following tips come from AdviceToWriters


Karma Brown 
Write, or read, every day... it keeps the writing muscles in shape 
=if you want to be a writer, then BE a write
=Accept the shitty first draft 

Isaac Asimov 
"The ordinary writer is bound to be assailed by insecurities as he writes....The ordinary writer is therefore always revising, always chopping and changing, always trying on different ways of expressing himself, and, for all I know, never being entirely satisfied."

Carolyn See
Henry James said, “What is character without action?” Your character doesn’t have to jump off a building, but what does he do when he’s moving? Where is he? What’s he doing? Cast him up in front of your eyes. He’s yours now. You own him. And from now on, it’s a combination of what he does and what you want him to do that’s going to make this character come alive.

James Joyce:
The more we are tied to fact and try to give a correct impression, the further we are from what is significant. In writing one must create an endlessly changing surface, dictated by the mood and current impulse in contrast to the fixed mood of the classical style. This is “Work in Progress.” The important thing is not what we write, but how we write, and in my opinion the modern writer must be an adventurer above all, willing to take every risk, and be prepared to founder in his effort if need be. In other words we must write dangerously: everything is inclined to flux and change nowadays and modern literature, to be valid, must express that flux.
Since this class is about short stories, Joy Williams gives her advice in Eight Essential Attributes of the Short Story and One Way it Differs from the Novel:

1) There should be a clean clear surface with much disturbance below.
2) An anagogical level.
3) Sentences that can stand strikingly alone.
4) An animal within to give its blessing.
5) Interior voices which are or become wildly erratically exterior.
6) A novel wants to befriend you, a short story almost never.
7) Control is necessary throughout. Constraints allow the short story to thrive.
8) The story's effect should utterly transcend the naturalness and accessibility of its situation and language.
9) A certain coldness is required in execution. It is not a form that gives itself to consolation but if consolation is offered it should come from an unexpected quarter.

1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
4. Every sentence must do one of two things–reveal character or advance the action.
5. Start as close to the end as possible.
6. Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them–in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
7. Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
8. Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.



Wednesday, February 5, 2020

Reading Notes: Narayan's Ramayana, Section C

4.03. Vali_Sugriva_fight


Image: Sugriva and Vali begin to fight. Source: Chithira Poomalai

by Romesh Dutt

  • poem format 
  • Rama and Sugriva are friends/allies 
  • Vali's wife Tara is begging her husband not to to start war
    • tells him that he doesn't know what strength and forces that Sugriva has
    • Tara tries to warn him that Sugriva has befriended Rama
    • "Conscious strength, not hesitation, speaks in voice so proud and high"
  • Tara urges Vali to make peace with Sugrive & become his companion 
  • "Brother's love is trust safety, brother's hate is deadliest sin"
  • Vali insists that he must fight Sugriva 
  • Tara begins to cry as she prays for Vali 
  • Vali then takes off to find Sugriva, "hissing like an angry cobra"
  • Vali tells Sugriva that he is going to kill him; however, Sugriva disagrees and says that it is Vali who is going to die 



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Rama hiding before he ambushes Vali and kills him. Source: wordpress

by: Romesh Dutt 
  • written in poem format again
  • both bleeding, but continue to fight 
  • Rama has been hiding 
    • In an ambush, he appears shoots his arrow at Vali 
  • Vali is hit with the arrow and falls and dies 


Monday, February 3, 2020

Biography: A personal letter to myself



A story to myself whenever something in my life goes wrong: 

Kennedee,


You're reading this, well, because something has obviously not gone exactly how you pictured it to be. And for you- a perfectionist- I know that you are beating yourself up about whatever has happened. I know that you are frustrated and most likely upset with yourself, if you had any control over the situation, BUT, there are some things that you need to know.

·      You have overcome sooo much throughout your life- seriously, you’ve came out on top in so many aspects in which you weren’t dealt a good deck of cards. Think about the big picture of your life and ask yourself: “Is it really THAT big of a deal?”
·      You are smarter than you give yourself credit for
·      If you haven’t already, take whatever journal that you’ve been writing in and let out all of your frustrations. Turn on some music, whether it be country or Christian worship songs and sit alone in a room to take time to reflect on the situation
·      If you need to cry, it is absolutely okay. Get out all of the pain that you are feeling. Once you do that; however, you need to pick your head back up and keep moving
·      Remember your favorite quote:


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Winnie the Pooh Quote. Source: Pinterest 


     You are so blessed and have come SO FAR in the last two years. Whatever this situation may be, know that you are not alone in it. Now, dry your eyes and smile, because life is a precious gift that is not promised from one day to the next! 


a Authors Note: 
       My reasoning for writing this letter to myself is because sometimes, I am my own worst critique. This quote that I put as my image is one that my sister Morgan sent to me my senior year of high school when I was going through a really tough time. This quote has stuck with me throughout college and has helped me in the greatest and hardest situations that I have encountered in life thus far. This quote by A.A. Mine is so special to me. 






Sunday, February 2, 2020

Yoga- Topic Research


Yoga Mythology: 64 Asanas and Their Stories by [Devdutt Pattanaik, Matthew Rulli]



Yoga 
For one of my sources for my project, I have looked into and decided to use a book that Professor Laura provided me with called Yoga Mythology By: Devdutt Pattanaik with Mathtew Rulli
Although there is not a full link to the book that I can provide, I have included a link for anyone who is interested in to to start with a free sample of it from google play You can also get the book for you kindle from amazon here. This book provides the names of 64 yogic asanas and tells of their stories, as well as how their names are connected to yoga poses.

In the first chapter of this book, it talks about a household metaphor of yoga in which women use rice flour to create patterns called kolam or rangoli on the floor just outside their house. Here, dots and lines are joined, with the reminder that connecting starts to create constellations helps us understand the sky.

Other points-of-reference from this chapter include:
- yoga is also referred to as 'joga'
- it has different meanings, which is contingent upon a person's context of it
- adjectives that are used to describe the connection of yoga

  • karma yoga
  • bhakti yoga 
  • gyan yoga 
  • hatha yoga 
  • tantra yoga 


OTHER RESOURCES  

The wikipedia page on Yoga is another source that I think will be great in learning to origins of it. 
The wikipedia page on Yogi. From this article, it states that a Yogi (male) lives by voluntary ethical precepts called Yamas and Niyamas, including: 

  • Ahiṃsā (अहिंसा): nonviolence, non-harming other living beings
  • Satya (सत्य): truthfulness, non-falsehood
  • Asteya (अस्तेय): not stealing
  • Dayā (दया): kindness, compassion
  • Ārjava (आर्जव): non-hypocrisy, sincerity
  • Kṣamā (क्षमा): forgiveness
  • Dhṛti (धृति): fortitude
  • Mitāhāra (मितहार): moderation in diet both in terms of quantity and quality
  • Śauca (शौच): purity, cleanliness
  • Tapas: austerity, persistence and perseverance in one's purpose
  • Santoṣa: contentment, acceptance of others and of one's circumstances as they are, optimism for self[32]
  • Dāna: generosity, charity, sharing with others

The wikipedia page on Yogini, a female practitioner of Yoga.



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Feedback Strategies

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Feedback Gallery

I thought that the feedback gallery provided a good sense of the type of comments that we should be leaving on one another's blogs. It is better to be specific in the questions that you ask and your reasonings behind asking them, so that the author is able to fully understand how you have perceived their writing and how they can help answer your questions.

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How I feel when I'm left with my thoughts for too long meme. Source: cheezburger.com


 Articles 

"If you accept a limiting belief, then it will become truth for you." Louise Hay
This quote came from the article How to Let Go of Negative, Limiting Beliefs About Yourself By Mike Dileone

This article hit home for me. I am 100% guilty for allowing myself to be defined by labels of todays world. The author describes this belief to be what holds people back from unleashing their greatness within. 


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As the years go by, those labels, whether true or not, become sewn into the fabric of our being. They become part of our core, the vocabulary we use about ourselves, and the thoughts we hold of ourselves.

This quote came from the article How to Let Go of Negative, Limiting Beliefs About Yourself By Mike Dileone


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Mike Dileone lists 4 strategies for eliminating negative core beliefs: 
1. Write down or say out loud the belief- but really, do both 
2. Think back to the earliest time you can remember having that belief
3. After you've replayed it in your mind, put yourself in the other person's shoes and reframe it
4. Challenge the belief. 


Article #2 that I read was from inc.com called Want to Raise Successful Kids? Science Says Praise Them Like This (but Most Parents Do the Opposite)

 I chose this article because I think that these negative thoughts and perceptions are first formed through childhood. This article discusses the differences in a fixed vs a growth mindset. A fixed mindset is the belief that a person's skill is almost entirely innate. A growth mindset is the belief that achievement is much more variable, and that intelligence and problem-solving abilities can be developed over time. In a study of 7th graders that were followed for two years, Dweck's research indicated differences in the following aspects of the two groups of students: 
  • goals 
  • attitudes toward effort and failure 
  • boredom and difficulty
I think that it's interesting how it's suggested to ask one another what is something that everyone struggled with that day instead of asking how their day or school was. 

 "Praise your child explicitly for how capable they are of learning rather than telling them how smart they are."
Quote source: Angie Aker's (inc.com, orginally from Upworthy).